Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Part III, Chapter Eight: Kiratake Is Stung

Part III: Zhian

"A family ceases to be a family the minute it becomes necessary to pick sides." --Shiromori priest, c. 870 AE

April 22, 1112 AE
Shiromori Castle, Ayumora, Shiromori

Kiratake's mental count of the seconds had reached a hundred and still Kitasaka paced. What was taking him so long? Yes, she understood that it could be difficult to find words, but every minute spent hesitating was a minute wasted; why couldn't he just spit it out? "It has to be said, Kitasaka."

It did. She knew it, and he knew it. She'd known it from the moment he'd told her, and he from the moment Guildsman Aero had told him. Maru and Kawa had to be told, and soon.

Kitasaka stopped, clearing his throat and staring down at his granddaughter. "You're right. Anyway, Maru... I don't know an easy way to say this, so I'm going to be frank. Your father has been hiding things."

Beside Kiratake, Maru uncrossed her legs, leveling her posture as her hand clenched into a tight fist. "Why does that not surprise me?"

Kiratake sniffed. "Tell her what it is."

He opened his mouth--likely to ask her if she'd rather tell Maru herself, no doubt--but it was Maru who spoke first. "Please, do; I'm curious now."

Curious, she claimed. Well, she wouldn't be for much longer. The thing about curiosity, Kiratake mused, was that it was often replaced by another emotion, and not always a pleasant one; in Maru's case, she suspected it would be anger. Fury. Wrath.

Kitasaka swallowed, then allowed himself one blink before breaking the news. "Maru, your mother has written you and your brother several letters over the past few years. Your father's been hoarding them."

Silence. Kiratake didn't have to look to see Maru's reflection; in her mind's eye, the wide mouth, the shocked stare, and the arched brows were as clear as the wall in front of her. The silence took on a different form. No longer was it the fragile quiet of impatient waiting, but the brief calm before a particularly violent storm. "...what?"

"We're sorry that you had to hear it from us, Maru," Kiratake apologized, adjusting her posture as she suddenly found no position comfortable.

Kitasaka nodded, a hint of a scowl tugging at his lips. "I told your father that if he didn't tell you, I would--and he didn't. This wasn't our choice, Maru; it was your f--"

"Don't call him my father."


No sooner had the word left Maru's mouth did Kiratake begin to stiffen. This was her son Maru was talking about. Yes, he had made mistakes--horrible ones, at that--but who hadn't? Ignorant fool or not, Kohashi was her child, and she loved him dearly; it stung to hear him denied, even if he did deserve it. "Maru..."

Maru tilted her head back and snarled. "No. I'm sorry, but I won't hear you call him that. He killed my lover and drove my mother away. He's making me marry a man I loathe--a man who tried to rape me, might I add--and now I learn that he's been keeping my mother's letters from Kawa and me. He lost the right to call himself my father the day I woke to find my mother gone and Aurius dead, and I won't stand to hear him referred to as such any more."

And with that, she cracked her knuckles and once again locked eyes with her grandfather. "What did the letters say?"

"Well, at first glance, nonsense," Kitasaka admitted. "Scattered, almost random thoughts. Then, I noticed something. If you take the first letter of each line of each letter, the same word is always spelt--'Shouchuen'."

"Shouchuen?" repeated Maru, a brief glint in her eye. "Do you think she's with my aunt and uncle?"

Kitasaka shrugged. "I would assume that's what she means, yes."

Thoughtful, Maru brushed her hair over her shoulder. "Have you told Kawa yet?"

"No. I plan on doing so when he gets out of his lesson."

Nodding, she pushed herself from the couch and stood. "He's a good kid; make sure Kohashi doesn't change that."

As Kiratake exchanged a puzzled glance with her husband, Maru slipped past him as she made her way toward the door. "Thank you for telling me. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some things to attend to."

NEXT CHAPTER:

11 comments:

  1. Sorry if this was a bit lackluster :( Probably should have been Kitasaka's POV.

    Anyway, I tried to make a video announcement yesterday, but my mom came home before I could get a decent take, so comments it is. I'm having visiting relatives from off the continent. They're arriving Thursday and staying until the end of the month. It's not like I'll be spending every waking moment visiting--I'm not particularly social as it is, and they'll be off doing touristy-type things like Stampede and going to Banff and whatnot--but still, since I can't really do anything productive without privacy, posting may be a little slow for a while... again. Sorry :(

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  2. Hell yes, hell yes, hell yes, hell YES!!

    *does cartwheels and happy dance at once* *falls on face*

    You GO, Maru! Run to Shouchuen and Aurius!! Don't let your, um, sperm donor or "fiancé" or creepy Ustelian stop you!

    And I hope you have a fun time with your relatives, Van (or at least don't have a miserable time, depending on what these relatives are like ;)).

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  3. The letters never mentioned Aurius, though. That would just be a pleasant surprise... :P

    Or maybe just a shock. She does think he's dead, after all. We shall see.

    Thanks Morgaine. I'm sure they'll be nice and all, but I haven't seen them in over a decade and based on my other relatives, I don't really expect we'll have much common ground to bond over :S

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  4. Ohhhh!!! It's about time she was told. And her reaction was much like mine would have been. Anger and then decision making. Hopefully she's about to run out of there. But then her brother will be left by himself!:(

    Have a good time with your relatives Van!:)

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  5. She did do a pretty good job about keeping her cool. Maybe because her grandparents aren't actually the ones at fault here. In any case, I probably would have been yelling.

    Thanks Phoenix :)

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  6. Oh I hope this means she is packing...although I can imagine her rage if the letters included the fact that Aurius was still alive...

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  7. Interestingly, the letters never mentioned Aurius, so she may be in for a shock ;)

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  8. Well, can hardly wait for Maru to find out Aurius is not dead after all. I like how she kept her emotions tightly reigned, she could have very easily gone apeshit, she would have been justified.
    Great update~ Will read more soon~

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  9. She did do a good job of keeping her cool here. I'm thinking she just didn't want to lose it in front of the remaining sane adults in the household.

    Thanks Drew :)

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  10. Ooo Things to attend to. Sounds mysterious and also revenge-y. So delightfully revenge-y.

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  11. Revenge-y is always good :D

    ...er, in fiction.

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